That's AMAZING. I can't wait to read the next bit!

This is what I have been looking for, a new story that gives me an idea of what exactly happened to Tron when he was turned. And executed so well! Your artwork is superb my good program, as is the script. And so professionally laid out!

Bring on part II, it will be well worth the wait! I can see I need to hook up the old printer and run off a hard copy for myself.

Selfish Q: do you plan to include any artwork of recos in Redemption? I'd love to see one with Jex and his entourage coming out.

Dude, chapter 1 and the prologue are excellent. The artwork is solid, and the pacing of the plot is rather good, too. I hope the liberties you are taking with explaining what happened to Tron's original disk and his facial injuries don't get retconned by a sequel movie. So far, this is quite a good adventure to tide us fans of Tron's character over.

A few nitpicks: I think once Tron or Yori referred to other programs as "people", and Tron himself said a few "out-of-character" words and phrases like "hell" "being invited over for dinner." Nothing too major, and it can probably be attributed to his time spent with Flynn. But it did catch my eye.

jonwes Wrote: It's here! You can now read part one on Issuu.com (I recommend the full screen mode): http://issuu.com/jonwes/docs/tronredemption1 Let me know what you think!

Well done. Seriously. I like this a lot.

Only criticisms (nit-picks, really) have been covered by Mayorcan.

Part 2, please!

I loved it, I couldn't stop reading it. I like how we don't get to see Tron's face. Also, does Jex look like Sark on purpose?

I can make a PDF version available to download on somewhere like Megaupload or something. I'll work on that tonight. That way it can also be nicely viewed on the iPad in an app like Cloud Reader.

Thanks for that! It took a lot of experimenting on my iPod Touch to get the script legible, so a lower res version for devices likemine is most welcome. Bring on part II!

Cool Chess Mess! Let me know if you see anything else. It's hard being your own editor. I already fixed some of the people/program references in the PDF, but I'll keep adjusting it if some other weird stuff shows up.

Sounds great! Think. Might have to get that one.

On that note, how far along is Part 2? I love having a serial story to follow and look forward to!