Dude, chapter 1 and the prologue are excellent. The artwork is solid, and the pacing of the plot is rather good, too. I hope the liberties you are taking with explaining what happened to Tron's original disk and his facial injuries don't get retconned by a sequel movie. So far, this is quite a good adventure to tide us fans of Tron's character over.

A few nitpicks: I think once Tron or Yori referred to other programs as "people", and Tron himself said a few "out-of-character" words and phrases like "hell" "being invited over for dinner." Nothing too major, and it can probably be attributed to his time spent with Flynn. But it did catch my eye.where to buy abortion pill ordering abortion pills to be shipped to house buy abortion pill online

jonwes Wrote: It's here! You can now read part one on Issuu.com (I recommend the full screen mode): http://issuu.com/jonwes/docs/tronredemption1 Let me know what you think!

Well done. Seriously. I like this a lot.

Only criticisms (nit-picks, really) have been covered by Mayorcan.

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On that note, how far along is Part 2? I love having a serial story to follow and look forward to!

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Greetings, jonwes:

Finally got a chance to read TRON: Redemption. I'm diggin' it, Man. I like the scene with Yori and the old-school solar sailer, as well as the flying vehicle that Ren has, and Jaren reminds me of Kevin Flynn. Looking forward to seeing Part 2. That Jex program reminds me of Sark, and as I was reading it, I could see everything in my head, as if I was watching it on the movie screen. I think TRON will be torn between Jex and Jaren's programs and he'll have a difficult decision to make - unless some USERS (hint, hint) come to his aid.

typicaltronname Wrote:Didn't say anything before, but the poster looks awesome and I'm looking forward to the story. Been trying to start a fan-piece myself for the last week or so, but the creative juices are plugged. At least I have a tag-line for it already. "A long time ago, in a server far far away..." I want it to take place in modern day, but in a different server and everything. This way I can incorporate the suits from Tron and have it slowly evolve into the suits from Legacy, just with a classic twist. For now it's in the old noggin, really looking forward to yours, though. Have you started writing part 1, yet?

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