What don't you like about 2.17? It reads pretty well to me. So far, all the elements you've invented carry the continuity of the TRON world and even help flesh it out.

Regarding the violence, it's fine. The e-world seems a bit rougher than ours and I can easily imagine some necessary ass-kicking (or nut-kicking) now and then.

On Strike, Oh heck... I forgot about that... Sorry, no more chapters until the strike is over...

I want more money....
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I want more money.... And cute Californian blonde girls...

Ummm, hang on, I don't charge for this, and my union membership ran out several years ago...

So I guess 2.18 should be here on Friday.

There was a brief continuity error in 2.17, but it's minor, so I'll mention it to avoid confusing people later who have already read it. Jet's not supposed to figure out the exact ratio of the "cycle" to "real world time" until chapter 2.18.... Only to have a general idea that it's less than 100 cycles per second but more than 50.

Anyway, since that cat's out of the bag, and it's not even close to a real plot device, until after it's mentioned in 2.19, I should mention it, since when I upload 2.18 I'll upload the corrected 2.17 as well.

It doesn't really make any difference if you read 2.17 with the exact ratio in it, but it does mention in the corrected version that Jet experiences 1 cycle to approximate 1 minute, so time passes 3600 times slower inside the EN511 according to subjective measurement.

Hence if Jet experiences 1 subjective hour of processor time, 1 minute passes by in the real world.

All up, this is condensed into the two sentences I added and 1 sentence I changed.

David1

The latest in what is looking a lot larger now than it did when I started it....

http://blackice.com.au/tron/

Direct Link

OK, now the action begins to form...

It's a little ahead of Friday, but I'm sitting here, sick, trying to keep my mind of the discomfort I'm in right at this point in time.... Flu is not fun.

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There's one thing this world needs, it's more protagonism, as is in this story, and nicely coincidental with thanksgiving. Thanks for pointing that out Aldul.

aldul Wrote: This should make any action movie producer drool with the prospects of realizing these scenes.

I agree, only a precisely deepened visual experience would do the memory I have of this story justice. Hopefully that will happen.

And Happy Thanksgiving!

uh oh, hope you don't need a stint.. I could start on a health rant, but it's not necessary.
I study alot of material on this subj. If you're willing to explain some of your problems, I may be able to help improve your condition, since I've brought better health on so many people I know.

good luck, pm or email me.

Well, the Doc's decided that typing is good therapy, since it moves my fingers but not my arm much.

Chapter 2.19 is up. - Click Here -


This is one of those linking chapters... So I tried to keep it interesting.

One more linking chapter after this, then the main story/action should start -

David1

I had email correspondance with David1 on the last post, so to do justice to medicine, and anyone who reads this, I'll add that he corrected me about vitamin k and taking warfarin, and statin drugs, here was my response:

" Big oops, eating certain food would be a bad thing indeed, I did read in these articles:

http://www.lef.org/magazine/mag2007/jun2007_report_vitamink_01.htm

http://www.lef.org/magazine/mag2006/apr2006_report_vitamink_03.htm

http://www.lef.org/newshop/items/item00718.html

http://www.lef.org/protocols/prtcl-155c.shtml#nutrsupp

I found low dose vit. k is possible, but that the tests should be monitored closely to control coagulation factors being problematic, I'm sure you've read enough about this, but better safe than sorry, and low dose vit. k helps stabilize warfarin, (but moreso prevent disease) as long as the blood shows no coagulation factor. Sorry I overlooked that, it's been a while since I've discussed this with anyone. the third article shows a great product that lowers fibrogen, a clotting factor in the blood, but it also has NSK-SD™ nattokinase, which if I'm not mistakenis an enzyme (like sarraflazyme)that scavenges only dead tissue in the body, helping increase circulation, and several other things. I also noticed a warning that vitamin E intake should be monitored, (by a doctor, using the template bleeding time test) towards the bottom of the second link, while taking the drug coumadin. "

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Firstly, great story keep up the good work.
Secondondly, (tjhis is just a nitpick) should this chapter be 2.1.11? That would make more sense when you stop to thing about it.

David1, you wrote all these chapters very descriptively, and I thoroughly enjoy reading it so far, if there were a way to write a story with this amount of dominant characters, without any of the vast descriptiveness being generalised which IMO, would sacrifice the quality of this story, it would seem you've done it, you keep it from getting too abstract, and I really enjoy this.

I do however, miss the narrative feel of a plot in such a great tale. I already expressed this, so I apologize.

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Hi All,

Chapter 14 is now online.

Click here to go to the episodes.

I hope you continue to enjoy this.

It's a little late and a little large. I think this is the largest chapter to date. So the quick edit before posting took me a lot longer than expected and I realised I hadn't put the threads to this section far enough back, but it should still take the story forward.

David1