Hi David1, welcome to Tron-Sector.

I think a lot of people agree that Tron 2.0 had a weak ending, including myself. That's why most of us were hoping for an expansion to the game that continued the story, and would have a better resolution. But it didn't happen. I'll take a look at your new ending, shortly.

As for the comic, it hasn't been discontinued. There are still 2 issues yet to be released, (for a total of 6). The run length of the series has always been up in the air, but lately it was confirmed that there would be 6 issues and we've only seen 4 so far.

You must be thinking of the earlier attempt at a Tron comic from 88mph Studios. Yes, that one was cancelled unfortunately. But a new one has been released in its place, from a different publisher called SLG Publishing.

You can buy all four comics from SLG's web site, if you're interested:
SLG's store

David1 Wrote:Hi All, Just played Tron 2.0 again and felt strongly that I didn't like the ending... Tron was magical. As a programmer at the time (or a wannabe at least) I maintained suspension of disbeleif. Not so with Tron 2.0. And the ending sucked, so I added a little bit of (missed) ending and then flowed onto a follow on. I saw a couple of pages from the first comic, but heard it was discontinued, and the urge to write my own continuation hit. Anyway, I thought I would post it so if anyone was interested, please enjoy. Please also go easy on me - It's a first post. But all comments - even flames, welcome. David1. http://203.13.16.1/tron/tron%202.1.htm

Greetings, David1 and welcome to TRON-Sector!

TRON the film was indeed a magical experience for me (and the rest of us here). We're all pretty much TRON 2.0 fans, but you're not the first to voice disappointment in the ending. Personally I didn't care for the entire story line of TRON 2.0. Didn't like the way Alan was an old, physically worn down guy with back problems, Laura was dead (except for that which remained in Ma3a), didn't care for the name "Jet", and of course, the ending was, for lack of a better way of putting it, kind of lame. Aside from my personal disappointments in the story of the game itself, I thought the game, as a whole, rocked! Perhaps I was more in love with the fact that I had the opportunity play in the TRON universe after more than TWO decades of waiting for such a thrill. The game play was fun, well executed and conceptually awesome (barring the story).

I'm sure you'll get some good feedback for you TRON fan fiction. Sometimes posts are slow to trickle in as we've all got our real world responsibilities to attend to, so be patient if feedback is slow.

A couple of threads you may want to hit are:

What's with your name?

And...

Don't forget to PING in every time you have yourself Another dose of TRON

I think you'll enjoy your time here at The Sector

Speaking of writing there's one thing I don't understand. Anything I write, people tell me it's good, but I don't think so. So either they're nice or I'm better at writing than I think I am. I guess my point is, I can be easily impressed by some fan fics, the others just kinda get boring.
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Cam_the_Man Wrote: Speaking of writing there's one thing I don't understand. Anything I write, people tell me it's good, but I don't think so. So either they're nice or I'm better at writing than I think I am. I guess my point is, I can be easily impressed by some fan fics, the others just kinda get boring.

I do that in everything I do, drawing, programming, writing. Personally I've decided it is because I am too close to what I am doing to appriciate it. Whenever you do something you always look for what you could have done better and you end up becomming obsessed with the faults.

Thanks for the link, and since you need some constructive criticism, I'll be happy to point some inconsistencies out.

The personal parts in Tron 2.0 are null. It's elemental, not personal, yet it had people in it. mmmk. The intervention of acting was almost gone, it was just data in, data out, with people in it, didn't I already say that? Oh wait, but hate and greed, that's some good acting in it, oh and gimme my disk.. ect.

Then, you take the movie Tron: peculiarly, has a respectful amount of (80's) feel, maybe even disrespectful to a computer society, which made adding the elements more exciting, but it's hard work, so... D'igsney, or the creators cut it down, made what little personal stuff they could add, then, add sports, and the whimsical MCP, delete the suck face stuff. k. so yeah, then it was taken from a truer form!! by d'igsney. So what can I say, I would like a film by Lisberger this time.

There's the "personal" part, so If I continue, it wouldn't help your story, which is a small screenplay at this moment, but your background, and definitions must scream "star-trek", or real science adopted by sci-fi.

Good luck!

I realized after I looked through the thread you added the second chapter. So I'll make an effort to wrap my head around that.

It sounds like Jet's characteristics are writing themselves, as if he's imposed in the realm of Tron, and vice versa. I realize you are continuing the storyline, but it sounds like his abilities are bleeding all over, instead of a resolution for his personality.

However, I may not have read correctly (or thouroughly enough), -characters abilities, are they due to the abilities that they have, or because they are instable, and unable to control a concious within machines around them, inside thier minds? (just the right answer will do, sry). (since the connection is severe in Jet, I assume there is also that means there is the hypothetical, even so, the mystery needs work, to pop my nerves into recon mode..)

Like the technical side of the chapter, nice work.

Let me know if thats too much wierdness, or ignore me, that works too lol.
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Thanks Cam_The_Man, Jademz and Aldul,

I downloaded the mod kit and sat down and started writing a plot and I guess you've seen a "first draft" as it came out.

I do appreciate the responses, and I hope you've enjoyed reading the chapters so far. I'm presently working on Chapter 3 and figured I'd sit down at the end of Chapter 3 and decide how seriously I wanted to continue. I guess writing Chapter 1 was therapy for my Tron-starved mind, and two was because I needed to continue.

I am presently writing Chapter 3 - which should have a few suprises and set the plot ball rolling. After that, things should start warming up.

There are 20 chapters planned if I continue to the end, and the plot continues to the finish. There is a mix of real-world plots and issues and a few chances planned for Jet to realise who he is and why things are the way they are, as well as having to make choices of the kind people shouldn't have to. Some real-world hacking coming too (Don't worry - that's not a spoiler) and a few twists to the story.

It's set in the modern era, yet I've drawn the entire concept from the basis of the original movie, updated and taken 2.0 into consideration and treated it all as seamless.

So essentially, I'm trying to return to the feel of the original while respecting 2.0.

The main inspirations for this story/expansion are the unsatisfactory ending for Jet/Mercuty, the lack of Flynn in the sequel, the sad happening to Lora (Should have been a bigger plot mechanism) but especially the discussion between Walter Gibbs and Ed Dillinger, which I beleive gave an insight into the real nature of the other side of the screen - in fact, that one conversation made it possible for me to build a story spanning both TRON and TRON2.0 and combining both elements while attempting to weave in a smattering of modern concepts and ideas.

And even a touch of "Religion" as Ed Dillinger pointed out in Tron.

I also drew on a lot of older ideas such as Optical Loop memory. I won't bore you with details that might show up later in the plot, but I recall discussing such concepts with Romanian engineers a long, long time ago, and I guess that all wove into the final.

Sorry about the typo's. I'm terrible at spotting my own mistakes.

I finally got the comics and now I'm sorry I did, because I can see a similarity in some of the planned plot mechanisms (only mechanisms - not the actual plot). . So I've only skimmed them and I might leave them alltogether until my plot is well underway.

But the art is nice

Aldul - you hit the nail right on the head. I'm trying for "sci-fi plausible" as you put it. So I'm glad it looks that way. And there is a working "model" I am using for each plot mechanism which fits in, in it's own way, with both the original and sequel.

I hope to have Chapter 3 finished this weekend. If I keep going after this, I'll aim at one chapter every 1 to 2 weeks.
(Some are harder and longer than others).

Oh, This is also my first fan-fic so I'm finding the creative constraints of making assumptions about someone else's universe challenging.

Thanks again for the feedback. Feel free to comment on individual chapters - even if you don't like them.

David1.

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This third chapter brings in the plot elements needed to explain where this story is headed.

I hope you enjoy it...

David1

Thanks Jademz, Glad you;re enjoying it.

I've reached my decision gate after Chapter 3 and so far decided I want to continue. I'm at the point that as I'm writing it in realtime, the ideas are flowing in and changing the plot slightly and filling it out.

I know that's normal when writing, but I didn't expect some of the ideas that have come up to have come up and I want to use them.

Chapters 4 and 5 are now complete, but only a very rough draft level, so I'll clean up ch4 by Friday (My time) and upload.

Chapter 6 is underway, as I realised I need to have some in the buffer as I'm starting to realise more and more that I need to make a *slight* change to something I wrote in a previous chapter. Which is going to be combersome for continuity if you've already read a chapter.

By Chapter 6, the action has moved to the digital world, so I'm about to start adding in some Programs.

I might take a ticket from Sora.exe's book here are use some local names, so if anyone would like to add their name, please send it through. I won't intentionally use any names without the user's permission.

I won't ask for all the details as Sora did, although you are welcome to add preferred details about your self (Sex, Appearance, Alliances etc.) but I may not use them as expected so if you do leave a "Program" name, please don't be offended if I use it differently to what you intended, although I will add a comment to this thread if I use it so you know it was used and is attributed.

David1.