DawnStar
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Posts: 159 | Something I dug up just now
on Saturday, January, 05, 2013 5:09 PM
Ok, I just found a somewhat Tron-related poem lying around in my room. (In case you are wondering, this poem actually talks about the ending of TRON: Legacy, where Sam and Quorra are riding away on Sam's motorcycle and watching the sunrise.)
I usually never follow a rhyme scheme for my poems, so it might be kinda crappy.... >_>
Ok, here goes:
The dusk has gone.
The sun glimmers on the horizon,
Light of a changing world.
The wind quivers with new life,
And the light starts to shine.
New life. Two friends changing the world....
The wind sings in the bright dawn.
On the horizon,
Warm sunlight blazes gold.
Two friends touched by destiny.....
If you want to change the world, you must first change yourself.
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HooDooMan
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Posts: 585 | RE: Something I dug up just now
on Saturday, January, 05, 2013 7:29 PM
Nice work, DawnStar! I like it! 
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DawnStar
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Posts: 159 | RE: Something I dug up just now
on Saturday, January, 05, 2013 8:19 PM
Thanks! I'm kinda planning to expand this some more, but am not sure where to go. I'll keep working on it when I can.
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DawnStar
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Posts: 159 | RE: Something I dug up just now
on Saturday, January, 05, 2013 10:31 PM
Ok, I expanded on it some more. Tell me what you think:
The dusk has gone.
The sun glimmers on the horizon,
Light of a changing world.
The wind quivers with new life,
And the light starts to shine.
New life. Two friends changing the world....
The wind sings in the bright dawn.
On the horizon,
Warm sunlight blazes gold.
Two friends touched by destiny.....
They ride on,
Over hills and valleys,
On to their favorite cliff.
Two friends together, in the dawn,
Ready to change the world.
As the sky lightens,
The burning light shines in their eyes.
Blinded at first, they turn away,
But face it again, as they are ready.
The two face toward the future,
Wondering what it will hold.
They look out over the horizon,
As the fate of the world rests on their shoulders.
Unsure at first, the two become filled with doubt,
Wondering if today, they can really change the world.
The wind roars in the blinding sky,
And fills them with dark fear.
Memories have driven them far,
But it cannot determine their path.
Pondering this, they realize
That the world is bigger than they thought.
As the day grows brighter,
Hope shines its golden rays,
Banishing the fear in their hearts.
Then they realize, today is not a day to change the world.
Today is a day to change themselves.
If you want to change the world, you must first change yourself.
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HooDooMan
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Posts: 585 | RE: Something I dug up just now
on Sunday, January, 06, 2013 1:01 AM
Oooh...very good! I especially like the last line. A little bit of hope...a little bit of doubt...and most importantly, change. But the change has to start from within. Nicely done! :-)
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DawnStar
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Posts: 159 | RE: Something I dug up just now
on Sunday, January, 06, 2013 1:05 AM
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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