Hikaru.EXE User
Posts: 1,005 | Scary story i made up... on Wednesday, May, 11, 2005 8:09 PM
This is a scary story I made up for my friends. I really scared them but most people might think it's stuipid...
just try to imagine it...
It started out like any other saturday. I decided to take a drive down to my grandma's. Just recently it had been my birthday and I got a brand new Mustang. My grandma lived on a mountain. It had a really nice view. She had won the lottery three times in a row.
To get to grandma's house you had to go through this forest. It was really green...
but not now.
The trees began to look as though they had been burned...
A tree came crashing down onto the hood of my car and threw me straight through the winshield. I was bleeding very badly.
I yell for help then looked left then right and then left again.
But this time there was a house that I didn't see before.
It was really run down and the door was broken down.
I ran straight inside and yelled for help again. no answer. I then noticed that the main hall way went further into the house than the house actually went.
so I went and looked inside one of the rooms... It had bloody flower wall paper on the walls, cieling and even the floors...
in the corner was a corpse...
I started to run out the door when I realized it wasn't there anymore.
A camera flash...
I looked and the door was now on the other wall... So I went ahead and walked in. This room was exactly the same except a cup full of blood and a knife were on the wall.
I pulled the cup off the wall and blood fell all over me.
Another camera flash...
A door out was in this room and i ran out... The hallway was shorter now. There was now a front door and it was locked.
As I ran to the other side of the hall way I saw something move in the corner of my eye...
Camera flash...
I then ran up the stairs into another room with a grand father clock. The grand father clock had a hole in it and I opened it up and looked up. Blood righting said "look closer".
Camera flash...
Something shoved me inside and I fell down the hole into a room with about 3 inches of blood flooding the room.
Camera flash...
I ran out into the hall way but was disturbed by a camera hanging by a string...
"look closer"
I opened up the camera and looked at the film...
pictures... pictures of me and different moments in the past two hours...
I darted out the door and past my car down the gravel road.
Suddenly a translucent figure grabbed my legs and dragged me back into the house... I remembered my mom, my dad, my grandma, and my grampa even though he always hated me...
My body wasn't ever found but it was discovered that my grand pad had died in bed at 4:27 that morning...
He hated everyone...
He hates you...
He wants to kill you...
He's coming for you...
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josh.exe User
Posts: 0 | Re: Scary story i made up... on Wednesday, May, 11, 2005 8:31 PM
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Posts: 1,005 | Re: Scary story i made up... on Wednesday, May, 11, 2005 8:33 PM
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Posts: 0 | Re: Scary story i made up... on Saturday, June, 04, 2005 3:34 PM
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Tony.ROM User
Posts: 0 | Re: Scary story i made up... on Saturday, July, 30, 2005 9:34 PM
Now I want to write a story!
Day1
You are moving to an old, OLD house in the middle of what used to be a town. The town was leveled, but the old house still stands by its rickety beams. All around the area you can still see where the other buildings were. Piles of burnt wood, crushed bricks, and the strangest thing, gaping holes in the ground around the vicinity of the town. You enter the house to find the inside very well-kept. Nobody has lived there for more than 200 years, yet there is very little dust. You climb the creaking stairs to the bedroom. It is in awful condition. There is a hole in the ceiling and rocks on the floor. Birds even sit on the old rafters for shelter. You leave the bedroom to find a different room to stay in overnight. The parlor is the best. You unfold your sleeping bag and gety ready for the next day.
Night1
You wake up late at night from an old clock chiming 13. The hands on the clock are gone, and your watch has stopped. You open the curtains and there is no window! A cloud of dust apperas every time you move. The clean room you remebered is now in shambles. Your sleeping bag is layered in fine dust, and the furniture is torn in half. You go towards the front door, and it is gone too! You hear a faint laugh. You turn around and an owl is perched on the fireplace! You panic and decide to climb up the chimney. It is just as soot covered as the rest of the room. You manage to climb very far and you hit your head on a very hard rock jutting out of the wall. You look to see how much further the chimney goes and you see the rock was a skull! You fall to the bottom of the chimney and the log rack stabs your back. You are unconscious.
?Night3?
You wake up in a daze lying in a dark bedroom. You hear another faint laugh and you notice another pesky owl watching you with its huge eyes. You shoo it away to see where it flys, but it just hoots and jumps a little. You try to grab it and it bites your hand. Another laugh only louder. You know the owl is not making the sound so you look away. The owl disappears. Underneath the door you see a band of light like someone is walking by with a candle. You hear foot steps and you see a shadow under the door. The door opens suddenly and you see a translucent ghost emitting a glow. It is holding a fishing pole. It slowly walks away and leaves a trail of terrible smelling liquid. You follwo it and you exit the house through a secret opening.
Day4
There is a river behind the house with a waterwheel staying still even though the water is rushing downhill. The ghost sinks into the water and you see a skeleton jamming the waterwheel. The fisherman was murdered by someone. You check the skeleton and yor see a star shaped hole in the back of its head. There is a small garden on the other side of the wheel, so you climb on the wheel and descend on the other side. The skull shatters and the wheel turns in the opposite direction of the water. The garden is alive from the river, but there is a spot where someone dug a hole. You dig and find a star shaped hammer. And then you find a trap door. It cracks open and you fall into the basement. You look up into the sky and see the house was not there! The holes were where the houses used to be! You are stuck in a hole and you see your body on the floor. 200 years ago you killed the town and your soul was trapped in the house. When you entered in your new body, your trapped soul became one with yours. You left your body and your soul was banished. Your hammer smashes the back of your head leaving a perfect star shape. Your soul is dead.
THE
END
I made it up as I went. I couldnt think of a good ending, so I did that!
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Hikaru.EXE User
Posts: 1,005 | Re: Scary story i made up... on Saturday, July, 30, 2005 9:59 PM
That was a good story I want to make up another version...
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Hikaru.EXE User
Posts: 1,005 | Re: Scary story i made up... on Sunday, July, 31, 2005 1:41 AM
New York 1985.
John Gordon's House.
"Riiiiinnnnnggggg"
...
"Riiiiinnnnnggggg"
...
"Hello?"
"AHhHkKkK"
"Huh? He..."
"AhHhHhHkKkK (Crash)"
"Are you okay? Who is..."
"(Breathing) Illu... Don'... side... gner... celess... (Thud, crack!)"
(hang up)
The front door of John Gordon's apartment slams open.
A person with no face comes in with a bat and whacks John on the head.
John wakes up in a hospital bed...
"Where am I?"
John grabs his old clothes and begins to leave the hospital...
As he walks out of the room he finds a very disturbing image...
People, nurses, doctors, and patients; frozen in place.
"Oh my gosh."
He walks down the hallway seeing more and more time frozen people.
He begins to run.
As he passes some machinery, John notices that most of the technology is bio-organic. Eventually he gets out of the hospital only to discover he was on a shiny chrome street suspended thousands of feet in the air with frozen cars, supposedly speeding only to come to a completely frozen state.
After walking through the very futuristic looking city for hours, John start feeling woozy and passes out.
John wakes up in the same place he was. Unlike before things are moving again. He walks out onto the street and heads down a few couple miles. Eventually, he reaches a giant tv screen, just like the one in times square.
A reporter was on screen.
"In other news, world record breaker, John Gordon, the man who broke the record for longest coma 63 times in a row and remained in this state without age, has disappeared from his hospital. Coming to you from Los Angeles."
John looks in awe.
"Sixty-three years without age. My gosh..."
"I'm in Los Angeles? I need to get home!"
John notices a yellow button that says "Taxi" on it.
When John presses the button a taxi seems to race in out of nowhere.
"Hey taxi, can you take me to the airport?"
"Hahaha! That's a good one. Airports haven't been around for twenty years!"
"Um... Can you take me to New York?"
"Sure! Hop on in!"
A few hours later John arrives at New york, but all he sees is a vast desert.
"Is this New York?"
"Are you kiding me? New York was hit by a nuke abouts, eh..., 30 years ago in World War 3."
"Could you take me to my house?"
"Sures. In fact, your house is one of the only thing that survived that blast, you shoulds think of its as lucky. Since yous was so nice, you don't pay."
"Thanks."
"Don't mentions it."
Johns apartment was sitting right where it used to be, but instead scorched by flames.
As he went in, a rush of warm air and fear hit his face. He walked around and examined all of the rooms. They were exactly as he left them. No scorches no burns no blood.
He turned on the tv. There was mysteriously a video tape inside. The video played static. John had nothing else to be doing. So he sat and watched the tv for hours. Later John got up to use the bathroom. as he walked in he cut himself and bore blood. But, resisting gravity, the blood dripped up towards the ceiling.
The tv screen turns blood red, and blood drips out of the tv onto the ceiling. Suddenly, a gruesome looking figure, with no face, crawls out of the tv.
"AHhHhKkKkKk"
John hears footsteps outside the bathroom and looks out to see who it is.
John doesn't see anybody so he steps into the living room.
John jumps when he sees that the tv screen is blood red and the ceiling is covered in blood.
"AHhHhKkKkKk"
"Oh no..."
John picks up the phone and dials 911.
Suddenly the faceless person runs at John with a knife.
John picks up the phone.
"Hello?"
"AHhHkKkK"
John runs into the kitchen and grabs a bottle of Coka-Cola.
"Huh? He..."
John breaks the bottle on the faceless persons head.
"AhHhHhHkKkK (Crash)"
"Are you okay? Who is..."
"(panting) Tired..."
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Master-C User
Posts: 0 | Re: Scary story i made up... on Wednesday, August, 03, 2005 6:46 PM
I read the first story about the Forest and the house.
It was very scary, original, and good.
It would be a good idea for a horror movie plot.
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