Boingo_Buzzard
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Posts: 0 | Tron: Beta Cycle review topic
on Tuesday, December, 14, 2004 6:27 PM
Here is the first part of chapter one. I am basically wanting to get back into writing and I am flexing my knuckles on this piece.
Just FYI, I haven't played Tron 2.0 so I am not up to date with what happened in that storyline. This story takes place between the original Tron and Tron 2.0 so I may make some mistakes and trod on plot lines outlines in 2.0 For that I apologize.
Please be brutally honest, but not honestly brutal  I am looking for helpful criticism. Also, please let me know if you're interested in me continuing the story.
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josh.exe
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Posts: 0 | Re: Tron: Beta Cycle review topic
on Tuesday, December, 14, 2004 9:57 PM
1.in tron 2.0 no sea of simulation
2.and continue it
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The PimpDragon
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Posts: 652 | Re: Tron: Beta Cycle review topic
on Wednesday, December, 15, 2004 10:28 AM
Yeah, without a doubt continue it!
I took a stab at the "make a Tron 2.0 script" thread that you can read http://www.tron-sector.com/forums/default.aspx?do=top&id=212658&pg=2, just for fun, and found that the Tron Universe really does open itself up to new experiences and stories.
I really like the concept of upgrades being "painful" for programs, which makes a great deal of sense, since their code is being re-written and that code is what makes up their form.
It'd be like having your DNA re-coded, which I'm sure wouldn't be a pleasant experience!
Rock, rock on, Cheat Commando. Keep on with the story!
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Boingo_Buzzard
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Posts: 0 | Re: Tron: Beta Cycle review topic
on Thursday, January, 06, 2005 5:47 PM
I added another part to chapter 1. Please let me know what you think.
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Boingo_Buzzard
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Posts: 0 | Re: Tron: Beta Cycle review topic
on Tuesday, January, 11, 2005 11:07 PM
OK, fine. I guess it sucks. Would have been helpful at least to have some criticism. I guess I know my place.
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DaveTRON
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Posts: 5,314 | Re: Tron: Beta Cycle review topic
on Tuesday, January, 11, 2005 11:54 PM
Don't take it that way Boingo. I keep meaning to go in and read the stories, but I always get distracted. I am sure others might not realize it's there.
Let me put up a banner on the news and lets see if we can get you some feedback.
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TextPad
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Posts: 0 | Re: Tron: Beta Cycle review topic
on Wednesday, January, 12, 2005 6:10 AM
I, for once, only found the time now 
Well, BB, I liked what I saw. It's well written, captivating, and hey, it's about  
I've been reading fanfiction for some 5 years now and I know better than getting my hopes up on the first chapter.. but I do hope you'll keep up, I'd like to see more of the Lost Node (I'm a sucker for ancient civilization stories) and the P2P programs. it's an interesting idea (what color are they btw? I pictured 'em gold)
As a side note, and forgive me if I sound harsh, it's bad form for a fanfic author to "whine"  . I propose for Dave to make announcing new 'fics on the homepage a habit, just like in the Equilibrium forums- we're small enough for this solution to be reasonable.order abortion pill http://unclejohnsprojects.com/template/default.aspx?morning-after-pill-price where to buy abortion pill
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DaveTRON
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Posts: 5,314 | Re: Tron: Beta Cycle review topic
on Wednesday, January, 12, 2005 10:52 AM
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on Wednesday, January, 12, 2005 12:37 PM
Very nice story you've presented Bongo_Buzzard. You've done a great job. Love the visual discriptions and character interaction. Really makes the story come to life. Looking forward to each chapter.on line abortion pill misoprostol dose abortion medical abortion pill onlineorder abortion pill abortion pill buy online where to buy abortion pill
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Boingo_Buzzard
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Posts: 0 | Re: Tron: Beta Cycle review topic
on Wednesday, January, 12, 2005 2:31 PM
TextPad Wrote:As a side note, and forgive me if I sound harsh, it's bad form for a fanfic author to "whine"  . |
You're right. I was basically in one of my moods, and feeling sorry for myself. I posted without thinking and feel like an ass because of it.
Thanks Dave and others for showing more understanding and maturity than I did in this situation and I apologize for acting the way I did.
Thanks for the comments and feedback. I appreciate it.
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Astrozombbie!!!
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Posts: 580 | Re: Tron: Beta Cycle review topic
on Wednesday, January, 12, 2005 3:33 PM
Ur stroy is cool
I´m interested, you must continuing the story.
If you write details and descriptions all the fans will be attracted for your story.
Tron is all a universe for storys, aun ur story, and your story began very well.
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Traahn
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Posts: 3,301 | Re: Tron: Beta Cycle review topic
on Thursday, January, 13, 2005 12:46 AM
Yes, don't give up. I think it was very cool! Any lack of comments on a thread doesn't imply it's bad.
EDIT: There's a line that says this:
| "Having rouge programs wandering all over the system driven purely by their own internal motives was cause for trouble." |
Is this supposed to be rouge, or rogue? Either one could, theoretically, apply (as Sark is kind've "rouge" colored ) so I thought I'd mention.
    
I'm getting out of here right now, and you guys are invited.   -----^
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thebirdmenarecoming
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Posts: 0 | Re: Tron: Beta Cycle review topic
on Tuesday, January, 25, 2005 8:56 PM
Your story was the first thing I saw on this site. It's cool to see the spirit of Tron still kicking, and your computer knowledge is a cool touch. Please keep the story going!
-Tony
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